Grading Form: Hamlet Soliloquy Analysis
The grading form for the soliloquy essay, with levels from A to F.
ENGLISH 11AP
Grading Form - Hamlet
Name
Date Per.
Mr. Reed
A = 5 (8-9)
- CONTENT:
- Demonstrates a deep, full & complex, inferential understanding of shifting attitudes
Displays a keen perception of how syntax, diction, imagery and tone establish attitude
Is masterfully organized along tonal shifts
Frequently and accurately refers to the soliloquy - STYLE:
- Shows superior control of diction, syntactic variety, and transition
Demonstrates unique, creative expression - MECHANICS:
- No more than a few errors in language, syntax, or mechanics, none of which distract
B = 4 (6-7)
- CONTENT:
- Demonstrates a solid understanding of Hamlet’s shifting attitudes
Makes a less persuasive use of references to syntax, diction, imagery, and tone
Is less effectively organized
Is well developed with supporting details - STYLE:
- Demonstrates some control of diction, syntactic variety, and transition
- MECHANICS:
- May have more minor flaws, but none that interfere with understanding
C = 3 (5)
- CONTENT:
- Responds to passage in superficial, formulaic, inconsistent, or insufficiently supported ways
Shows clarity of thought but may lack complexity
Is organized but not along tonal shifts
Is adequately developed with some detail - STYLE:
- Sentences exhibit little variety
Average or repetitive word choice - MECHANICS:
- May have a few minor but not repetitive flaws (e.g. a sentence fragment or run-on)
D = 2 (3-4)
- CONTENT:
- Reveals an incomplete understanding of the soliloquy
Unable to show how diction, syntax, imagery, and/or tone manifest Hamlet’s attitude
May rely too heavily on paraphrase
May have generalizations without supporting detail or vice versa; may be undeveloped - STYLE:
- Sentences may be short and choppy, or structurally awkward; may lack fluency
Uses limited vocabulary; overuse of cliched language - MECHANICS:
- May show patterns of flaws in language, syntax, or mechanics
F = 1 (1-2)
- CONTENT:
- Reveals a blatant misreading of the soliloquy
May be deliberately off-topic or egregiously simplistic
Contains gross deficiencies in organization, clarity, fluency, and development - STYLE:
- Inadequate in all respects
- MECHANICS:
- Numerous serious and distracting fundamental errors
TOTAL/3 = Letter Grade AP Score